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Monday, February 13, 2023

When Riley Met Lucy Loud Chapter 4 The Valentines Disaster

 

              


When Riley Met Lucy Loud 

Chapter 4 The Valentines Disaster

 

“Hey guys Riley here and today I thought I would take Lincolns advice and talk to you guys as we know Valentines Day is coming up really fast and I intend to knock Lucy off her feet with this.”

At that moment Riley pulls down a chart with a schematics of some kind of car design.

“That’s right guys I’ve designed for Lucy her very own convertible Hearse perfect for her Funeral side hustle. The problem is finding time to work on it. You see all week the siblings have had me busy one way or another.

Coaching Lynn in professional wrestling.” Said as he pictures Lynns in ring session taking a clothesline and a top rope Frog splash (Brutal)

“Helping Luan with her Birthday clowning routine.” Riley said picturing himself falling from the unicycle onto the cake.

“Well I guess cakes on you hahahaha” Luan said as she got the party laughing.

“Going to Lola’s tea party and trust me guys refuse her it gets ugly need I say more” Riley said as he re scrolled the chart.

“Bottomline things get crazy here in The Loud House and rest assure you I have a plan. After all it is the wisest leaders who understands one person can’t do everything on their own.”

Riley said as he takes out a walkie talkie.

“Lincoln how’s the Hallway?”

“Hallway clear and sister free Riley.”

“Alright good! Lana where’s your location.”

“In the Garage Riley getting the framework done.” Lana responds as she welds the frame to Lucy’s convertible Hearse together.”

“I’m lucky to have a mechanical genius like Lana but it’s two person job at least to finish this by Valentines day tomorrow. As long as I have Lincoln and Clyde keeping tabs on the siblings I shouldn’t have anymore distractions so I can get this Hearse built.”

Riley then opens the door from his shared room with Lucy and Lynn to see no one in the Hall.

“Alright lets do this.”

Riley then bolts down the Hall and down the stairs he is nearly to the front door when,

“Hi Riley which hat do you think goes with this dress this one or that one?” Asked Leni who wore a new red top the hats were sombreros one pink with a red flower the other red with a pink flower.

Before Riley could answer Leni takes him by the hand and runs him upstairs to her room.

“Know what you can help me sort all my outfits.” Leni states.

“Dang it!” Lincoln says.

“Hi Lincoln!”

“Ahhh!! Oh it’s you Lucy?”

“Have you seen Riley?”

“Umm no I haven’t maybe he is walking the block or something.”

“Sigh! He has been distant all week maybe Riley’s lost interest in me Sigh!”

“Oh I’m sure that’s not true Lucy maybe he’s still getting use to the family, that’s it yes.”

“You sure?”

“Lets face it Lucy we are the Loud family.”

“Sigh! Thanks Lincoln you have helped reassure me I’ll go back to writing his Eulogy.”

Lucy walks away to places unknown.

“Got to move fast” Lincoln thought as he dashes for Lori and Leni’s room and peeks inside. He sees Riley sitting down being piled on by Leni’s clothes as her back is turned and throwing out fit after outfit on Riley.

Lincoln acts quickly and switches places with Riley successfully.

Then Leni turns around.

“AH Lincoln that’s weird I could have sworn you were Riley.”

With Riley now free of Leni he tries to make it to the door when he is startled at the front door opening as Lori and her boyfriend Bobby.

“Hey Riley just the man we wanted to see Bobby and I need you and Lucy to come with us now on a Double date.” Lori says really fast.

“What!”

They grab Riley and throw him in Vanzilla and Lucy is in the seat next to him.

“So they roped you into this to?”

“Sigh at least now I’ll have some time with you.

“Oh yeah that’s right Lucy can’t wait.”

Lucy could tell Riley was hiding something as her little smile turned into a frown.

Soon they arrived at some random fun house and restaurant that had a special deal free for double dates.

“So that’s what Lori wanted!” Riley thought to himself.

Though Riley did not stay long as the appetisers Riley managed to not accidentally spill cholate sauce on his shirt.

“Oh no shirts ruined got to go home and change.” Riley says as he bolts all the way home.

“Sigh see he’s not interested in me anymore.”

As Riley arrived home and was going to dash for the garage and work on the Lucy’s Hearse. Suddenly a flash of pink carries him off.

“Finally found you Riley have you forgot about today’s tea party.” Lola says as she literally drives Riley up the stairs in her pink car.

Luckily Clyde had witnessed the abduction.

“Lincoln and Lana we have a code pink repeat code pink.”

“Copy that Clyde time to put operation double into effect.”

Lincoln goes in and out of his room carrying a badly done doll replicant of Riley.

As Riley is set by the room Riley notices him.

“Um excuse me Lola but this tea is cold.”

“Ahhh Riley you’re right how dare I serve cold tea I’ll fix this right away.” Lola says as she takes the Teapot out of the room.

 

Lincoln and Riley place the double and run out the room When Lisa takes Riley by the hand.

“Sorry Riley but I must insist I check your brains neuron cells.”

As they enter Lisa’s room they are stopped in their tracks as Lily just made number 2 and stunk out the room. Riley used the chance to slip away during the confusion. As he then gets to the back door. He’s nearly hit in the face with a Hockey Puck.

“GAME ON RILEY!” Lynn yelled firing more pucks at him.

Riley ran to the living room.

“These girls are out of control” he thought to himself.

As he enters the living room.

“TIME TO ROCK IT TO MY NRE SOUND DUDE!” Luna Loud screams as she starts playing her electric Guitar literally raising the roof.

This is the part where Riley goes beserk.

“AHHHH ENOUGH!!!”

Everyone in the house is silent then Lori Lucy and Bobby burst in.

“Riley how dare you hurt our sister Lucy you mean the world to her.” Lori begins.

“Back off lady” Riley says as he storms out the door.”

As he leaves they all look to Lincoln.

Hours later Riley and Lana are working hard together and actually by some miracle they finish the Hearse.

“There we go Riley she’s ready to go.”

“Wow she’s beautiful got to admit Lana you have outdone yourself.”

“What do you think Lucy?” Riley says as Lucy appears beside him.

“LUCY!”

“So this is why you were acting so distant you were building this for me for Valentines day?”

“Of course and I’m so sorry if I made you feel I was ignoring you I just needed this to be a secret.”

As Riley said that a group aww was heard from the garage window as the rest of the Loud family were looking in.

“we’re sorry dude we know we can be over the top sometimes” Luna said.

“Hey it’s fine” Riley said as the Loud family join Lucy and Riley in a group or family hug.

Lucy then steps into her mini convertible Hearse and starts the engine.

“Well I guess all’s well that’s ends well” Riley says as Lucy runs over him with her Hearse.

“Sigh! now I can have your funeral thank you for making Valentine’s day special.”

“Anything for you Lucy” Riley replied sounding like he’s in a bit of pain.

“Sigh wait til I get a real Hearse.” Lucy says with a smile.



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Saturday, February 11, 2023

When Riley Met Lucy Loud Chapter Three


When Riley Met Lucy Loud

Chapter 3 The New Loud

 

Lucy Loud and Riley left Burpin Burgers together. Riley deciding to trust Lucy with whatever secret he is hiding. Riley can’t help but fear that this might change how Lucy feels about him with a secret this big.

Lucy can’t help but wonder why she is so obsessed with the truth about Riley is it the fact he’s a man of mystery therefor has an urge to solve it. Or perhaps does she feel Riley is just too good to be true. As Lucy began following riley through literally the woods of Royal Woods.

Until the two come to an open field that looked like it shouldn’t be there.

“Here you are Lucy this is it” Riley stated as he spun around his arms spread.

“Whats what Sigh!! I don’t understand.”

“You wanted to know where I live you see that digged in ground that was my house.”

“WHAT!” Lucy reacted as she climbed onto a nearby tree branch and saw the small like crater was in the shape of a house.

“Riley how did this happen.”

Riley looks to Lucy takes a deep breath.

“Well the truth is I’m not from your world Lucy I’m actually from another world and town called Madston and well one day I was alone like any other day except my neighbour a Scientist caused an opening in the rift between realities me and my house was sucked in and came out the other side here.”

This wild story of Riley’s did sound completely unbelievable and ridiculous to Lucy. Still she simply smiled for she could see it in Riley’s eyes he was telling the truth brace yourself there was more to tell.

 

“Sigh! You mean you are homeless? Lucy asked with concern in her voice.

“Yes also, to tell you the truth Lucy I’m not 9 years old even though I look like it here it’s simply the rules of reality here or so is my guess. This reality chose this form for me.”

So Riley told her everything that where he’s from and who he is and of course how he is able to pay for things in this world.

 

“In my world I’ve had success with webcomics and online videos enough that it’s kept me thriving back home. When I was sent here my phone is still linked to all my accounts from my world so basically with that I can still buy stuff.

Lucy took in every word that Riley said she said something Riley wasn’t expecting.

“Sigh! Maybe Lisa can help you return home.” Lucy said compassionately and comforting Riley.

“No Lucy That’s not necessary truth is I’m glad to be here. My life in that world was a prison I had no friends no loved ones not even a real family. Couldn’t even leave my house I’d rather be here with you where I’m free.”

“Sigh!”

“Is that your version of an Awww?” Riley said in a joking kind of manner.

“Sigh! don’t push it.”

She takes Riley by the hand, and they head back to the Loud House on the way Lucy begins to think how she is going to explain this to her family.

“Sigh!”

With certain things being left out Lucy’s parents agree to take the Riley boy in. Especially since their own investigations turned out no traces of Riley’s existence with a bit of paperwork they were able to officially make Riley a part of the family.

Did this complicate Lucy and Riley’s relationship. Well to them not at all.

At night Lucy would sleep in her Coffin offering Riley her bed. You can imagine Riley took an interest in the Lucy’s coffin.

“So, Lucy did you buy this Coffin or crafted it yourself?”

“I always craft my own Coffins if you like I’ll craft you one”

“Okay as long as you promise not to bury me alive in it.”

“I make no such promises. Welcome home”

With a hug to each other they fall asleep.

The next day Sunday morning it was now time for Riley to begin settling into his new home and life with the Loud’s whom were kind enough to take him in.

As often the case Lucy was by his side. They ventured outside when Riley noticed Lynn practicing Luchador moves in a DIY Wrestling Ring.

“Hi Lynn just wanted to say your Ring is all wrong you’re likely kill yourself in this death trap.”

“Oh yeah and what would you know about it” Lynn responded.

“Sigh! Where Rylie was from he was Pro wrestling champion and part of his training was Ring construction.”

“Don’t worry Lynn I’ll have a regulation approved Ring for you in no time.” Riley smiled and got to work.

As he was building the other Loud siblings got interested in the project.

“Alright Lana blow torch” Riley called.

With their combined work efforts Lynn now truly has a Pro Wrestling ring in the background complete with the spring in the middle.

Oh yes the family enjoyed themselves spending the day and Lynn soaked in all of Riley’s pro wrestling knowledge. Including a brief lesson in Luchador history.

For examples Luchadores never use to have regulation rings to take slams on they were thrown on Boxing rings which is why Luchadores developed their high flying style which involves them taking flips and rolls rather than slams!!

Afterwards Luna decided to rock out using the ring as a stage Jamming and Jamming. Even inviting Riley to sing along. And when he sings he don’t care who hears it whether they like it or not.

Perhaps Riley really can find a great life in his new world.


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Friday, February 10, 2023

When Riley Met Lucy Loud Chapter Two

 



When Riley Met Lucy Loud 

Chapter 2

The perfect week.

 

As Lucy and Rylie began spending more time together the more, they got to know each other during the school week.

As it turns out Rylie has a lot of interests which would slowly reveal themselves as he spent more time not only with Lucy but the rest of the Loud family siblings. As it turns out like Lynn Rylie also loved Luchador wrestling. Also wrote and draw his own comic strips.

This meant occasionally Lucy had to share Riley with her family. But hey isn’t that the case in all relationships. Besides if anything this made Riley more interesting and appealing to Lucy someone who can handle her siblings.

No matter how much time was divided Rylie always found time make every moment with Lucy as special as possible. Even volunteered to be a corpse at Lucy Mortician club.

Mind you sometime that did not tickle ouch especially when the club members wanted to practice their Embalming skills. Though Riley drew the line when Lucy ordered in a Crematorium.

Then the weekend hit which meant all this time was reserved for Lucy.

“Sigh where are we going now.”

“I figured a picnic on the front yard of the most Haunted House in Royal Woods was in order. If you weren’t afterwards, we can go inside.”

“I would love that.”

Little did Lucy know all her other siblings were following and watching them. Though Riley spotted them easy.

“You know you’re lucky you have such amazing siblings.”

“Sigh they can be overwhelming sometime.”

“Haha that’s true Lucy but at least they have your back.”

 

As the weekend continued to Saturday evening Lucy and Riley kept hanging out The rest of the Loud Siblings continued to follow them. Even to the cinemas where Lucy and Riley watched the latest horror film Sundown don’t let the title fool you it was the scariest Vampire movie in cinematic history.

As the movie finished The Loud siblings ran out screaming. Meanwhile Lucy and Riley came out smiling.

As Lori, Leni, Lincoln, Lynn, Luan, Lisa, Lana, Lola, Luna Duck behind Vanzilla as Lucy and Riley stroll by the parking lot.

“Where are you taking me now.”

“Well I’ve been aching to try one of them Burpin Burgers.”

“Sigh sounds perfect to me.”

“By the way your sibling who are hiding in Vanzilla over there are welcomed to come along to.

“Dang it Busted” Lincoln says.

 

Rylie shouted everyone burgers and drinks. Needless to say everyone approves of him dating Lucy and respectively choose to leave the couple alone to finish their day out.

“So how do you have the money to pay for all this?” Lucy asked out of no where.

“heh does it matter we had a great time didn’t we.”

“Sigh!! Sure but I still don’t know a lot about you I don’t know where you’re from or where you live now? Until you can tell me I don’t think this can continue!”

“Well alright come with me it’s easier if I show you.”


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Wednesday, February 8, 2023

When Riley Met Lucy Loud Chapter One

 


When Riley Met Lucy Loud

         Chapter One A strange girl and the even

stranger boy

 

Our story begins at the end of the school day the evening sky is going purple The Morticians club has called it a day as Lucy Loud is walking home from school with her best friend Haiku. Haiku was coming over as they were going to exchange and read their new poems. Little did they know that Lucy Louds life would change forever as she and Haiku accidentally run into the Two bullies Hank and Hawk.

"Say look Hank look at these freaks."

"Ha tell me about it hey it's a little early for Halloween Hahahaha!

"Sigh! Can you both just move you're wasting our time."

"Look at this Hawk this one thinks she’s tough what are you going to do about it."

Lucy and Hank stare each other down even though you can't see it on her face Lucy's eyes narrow more into a death stare. Then a voice is heard in the wind like out of nowhere.

"Why don't you leave these ladies alone." the voice said.

Lucy and Haiku turn to see a mysterious boy standing behind them.

"And what if we don’t small fry, we've squashed bugs bigger than you before."

Haiku and Lucy stare to see this boy is totally calm. Lucy can't help what is with this guy.

Suddenly the boy speaks.

" You sure you want to do that. I'm prepared but are you! Are you prepared to bet your life.

"THAT'S IT YOU'RE...." Before Hawk could finish his sentence and set up a Haymaker punch the mysterious boy struck first with a Palm transitioned to an elbow strike and kept hitting with speed and fury that all you could see is a cartoony brawl cloud when the dust clears the mysterious boy stood over Hawk.

"Hawk dude you're bleeding and if you're bleeding, I’m gonna Barf."

"Dude some of my bloods on you and now I'm gonna Barf!

The two bullies run off the sound of them vomiting can be heard.

"Hey new kid you didn't have to do that I already had it handled." Lucy says as she shows the boy a container of fake blood.

"You’re welcome by the way Lucy my name is Riley."

"Sigh! Very well you have my thanks." Lucy then notices bleeding coming from Riley's face

" You're hurt now I must make this right Sigh! You're coming to my house to get that stitched up,"

 

She grabs Riley comedically by the hand and literally drags him to her house despite his insistence that he was fine. As Lucy arrived home at THE LOUD HOUSE with her best friend Haiku and dead weight Riley. They move through the front door and inside was complete Chaos as the Loud Sublings were all over the place. Lana was throwing Mud pies at Lola while Lincoln was between them trying to settle them down about whatever it was they were arguing about this time.

Luna was rocking it out with new amazing Jams There is an explosion from up stairs Lisa blowing up her room again. as Lori, Leni, Lynn and Lilly all come rushing down the stairs. Lilly crawls right up to Lucy haiku and Riley and points directly at Riley and says.

"Pooh Pooh!."

At that moment everyone stops what they are doing and are completely fascinated with Riley

"Gasp can it be has it finally happened Lucy has finally brought a boy home." Lori says as she practically snatches Riley away and everyone is looking him over.

"He appears to be human enough." Lisa declares." Although a brain scan will confirm it."

"Sigh! He just helped me and Haiku out with some bullies Lori could you just stitch him up."

"Of course Come on Riley tell us all." as Lori and Leni and the rest of the Loud siblings shut themselves in Lori's room to hear the story as Lori patched Riley up. Leaving Lucy and Haiku alone downstairs

"Sigh!"

It had been hours until Riley was finally released from Lori’s room and with a little convincing from the master of convincement Lincoln Loud Their parents agreed to let Riley spend the night considering how late it had become.

Riley finally had a moment to himself or so he thought.

“You’re feeling better yet?” said Lucy who seemed to appear out of nowhere as she does.

“Yeah, I’m fine your sister did a good job. I’ll be honest I didn’t think they were ever letting me go free.”

“So I guess you’re going home.”

“Nope your parents said I should stay here tonight considering how late it is.”

“Sigh! Very well goodnight don’t let Fangs bite!”

“Fangs?” Before Riley finish his question

Fangs the Bat swoops past him.

“Wow” He gazes!

She has a pet Bat he thought to himself before he could say anymore Lucy was gone disappeared into the dark.

Two Hours later.

Lucy tried very hard to sleep in her Coffin yet she couldn’t escape her thoughts about Riley. Thoughts like No one has stood up for me like that before. He wasn’t even fazed when I appeared that usually spooks everyone.

“Sigh! come on Fangs.”

Lucy along with her pet Bat Fangs she decides to go out into the yard a place she would often go to get peace and stare at the infinite darkness above the night sky.

As she ventures outside, she is surprised at what she sees Riley is outside and meditating. He also seemed to speaking words of some kind.

Unrecognisable to humans accept for certain few. “Ph’nglui mglw’nafh Cthulhu Rl’yeh wgah’nagl fhtagn”

Lucy happens to be one of the few who recognise it.

“He’s read the Necronomicon” She then Sigh’s in a loving way.

“Hi Lucy!”

“Ahhh” she screams then thinking. He scared me.”

“Sorry to scare you so you couldn’t sleep to well you’re welcome to join me if you want.”

“Okay”

“So I see you were saying the Cthulhu chant have you read the Necronomicon and the writings of HP Lovecraft.”

“Actually I’ve read The bible of Cthulhu I’m actually a member of the Cult Of Cthulhu religion.”

Lucy looks to Riley as if her mind has just been blown.

“There’s a real Cult of Cthulhu?”

“Yep, I assure you don’t behave like the ones in the Mythos we don’t kill anyone it’s a legit recognised religion where we consider HP Lovecraft as a prophet That Great Cthulhu who may live in alternate universe passed on visions of himself and his brethren to HP Love craft himself.

“Woah that’s deep.” Lucy said fascinated and wanted to know more.

After that Lucy shared one of her poems.

“Darkness despair the only thing that’s fair we all share it, we all carry it deep down we’re all Impaired.”

“Very dark and Deep I like it.”

A small smile appears on Lucy’s face

“You really like my poem.”

“Sure do! But I ask who is the more impaire the ones enslaved by everyday routine til returned to the void. Or is it the ones who truly recognise the insanity of the world are they the ones who are truly free tell me how do we compare.

“Sigh!” Lucy does again in a loving way.

The next day the Loud family wake up and are getting ready for school it’s not until they do a head count they notice both Lucy and Riley are missing.

“Say where are Lucy and Riley?” Lincoln asks.

“I’m not sure?” Lori responds

Suddenly everyone is going crazy Luna going on about how she wanted to show Riley some more of her Jams. Lola wanting to invite him to a tea party. Lincoln wanted to share his Ace and Savy comics collection. It soon became an all out bicker.

Until there father Lynn Senior came into the room.

“Oh are you looking for Riley and Lucy they’ve already left they said they wanted to walk to school together.

Everyone couldn’t help but Awwww.

“I can’t believe Lucy has a boyfriend.” Lori declared.

“Really? I didn’t think they were alike at all Riley doesn’t seem like her type.” Lincoln said in a thinking pose.

“Perhaps brother there is a lot more to Riley than meets the eye if you guys had let me Cat scan him we’d have the answers” Lisa pouted.

“Perhaps they really are two peas in a Pod Hahahaha!” Luan joked.

As Time went by the Louds were still bickering until Lincoln looked at his watch.

“Guys stop we’re late for school.”

Just like that everyone is rushing out the door to Vanzilla in hopes to beat the school Bell.



Next Chapter coming soon

https://tapas.io/melrosejryan/series 

https://www.dailymotion.com/playlist/x7nr4h For video comics on my official Dailymotion channel

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https://tapas.io/episode/154853 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


  

 

 

 

 


 

  

 

 

 


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