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Showing posts with label horror comic review. Show all posts
Showing posts with label horror comic review. Show all posts

Monday, June 24, 2019

What If Christine Turned. A Daniel What If Discussion

Hey guys Ryan Melrose here and today it is time for my first What If based off an Independent Webcomic. 


This is What If Christine turned
A Daniel What If 
based off the webcomic by Sarah Nelson
please check out the series for yourself atwww.vermillionworks.com/daniel/enter 

Lets get started 
The What If starts right when Daniel is having his heart to heart with Christine revealing to het the terrible truth on how he became a Vampire. And who was responsible. Of course as we know by the main timeline Wayne was the one who murdered Daniel and accidentally set off the ritual that made Daniel into the monster he has become.
Christine is shocked by all this saddened and of course enraged. Something in Christine snaps like reality has amashed into pieces before her eyes. There is hate in her eyes hate for Wayne as well as for everyone else who treated Daniel badly. This is what created the Daniel before her. Now Daniel has finished talking and it's time for Daniel to slowly feed on Christine and do the inevitable. But  before he can sink his teeth into her Christine says it doesn't have to be this way. " When you went missing Daniel a part of my world went with you and when you returned I promised myself I was never letting you go again no matter what. Christine then grabs a Shovel and knocks Daniel out not for the rason you might be thinking. She runs off with the Shovel back to Daniel's grave site. 

She runs like the wind she knows she won't have much time before Dniel wakes up and will begin to drain her. She begins digging at Daniels unmarked grave digging with a almost sadistic smile on her face. Digging like a Woman possessed. She hits something solid it is the same mysterious coffin Daniel was burried on top of. Christine  quickly removes one of her earings and and begins stabbing herself trying to perfectly replicate the circumstances that changed Daniel into a Vampire. Just like when Wayne stabbed Daniel. weakened and losing consciousness she lays down on the coffin.

At that moment Daniel catches up seeing his beloved Christine lyig motionless on the coffin. hristine was just able to get her eyes open she says with her dying breath.

'Bury me my love before it's too late..

Daniel is disturbed by this but ultimately understands what she's trying to do for him and obeys her wish. When he finishes he falls to his knees as the rain falls soaking him. as he cries saring at the hole he filled in.

"What have i done
not my Christine

Then the rain turned into thunder something was happening here as lightning shot across the sky. And with a loud burst Christine bursts out of the hole like Demon escaped from Hell.
She is laughing like an evil maniac is this really the same girl that went in. needless to say Daniel's happy to see his now Vampire girlfriend Christine.


When Christine finally decides to come down Daniel ambraces her in his arms he told her that was was reckless of you what if you had died.. Christine simply smiled and said life without you or a world whwere we can't be together would be world not worth living. Now at that moment they are interrupted by voice.

"Hey what are you two doing here  the cemetary is closed I won't have you causing trouble." 
It was the new grounds keeper who had replaced Daniel his name was Buzz 
As soon as Buzz began to sound he quickly became afraid of the couple when he spotted their red evil eyes 
Christine instantly pounced the Grounds keeper and drained him completely and she rather enjoyed it.
About a week later Daniel and Christine had tracked down the detective and everyone else who knows abouthim and had a bit of a Putgig feast wiping them all out. Now with them out of the way they could kill  and feed with no problems. 

Then came a month later
Daniel and Christine decided to get married of course since they have eaten most of their close they had to kidnap some guests for the wedding feast. Of course none of the guest realise they're the ones on the menu. Needless to say it was masacre under Gods house.
Thats where we'll leave things for now . did you enjoy this part ? would you like a Part 2? if so should Daniel and Cheistine have a kid  comment Yes or no to vote of yes should it be a boy or a girl also comment boy or girl to vote. 

Alright catch ya's next time
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and by reading my horror comic


Monday, June 10, 2019

Horror Web Comic review Daniel By Sarah Nels

Horror Web Comic review
Daniel By Sarah Nelson

Today for my first post on this blog and first written review I thought I would do a written review for the horror web comic Daniel by Sarah Nelson you may visit her site yourself right here 
Or support her on her patreon

I've been reading quite a few webcomics lately being a struggling webcomic creator myself for me it's always amazing seeing what other talented people are coming up with, and one of the best webcomics I have read so far is Daniel 




For me I was instantly hooked with the artstyle and the 1930s black and white comics are always really cool. We do get a little colour sometimes throughout the story almost gives it a Sin City feel. The character designs are amazing and Classy. I take my hat off to Sarah Nelson the ammount of research she must have had to do to find the right clothing designs for the characters and the settings and the Automobiles..



The story itself is what has kept me reading It's basically about this man named Daniel who has secretely been in love with his bestfriend a Woman named Christine. They have been close for years despite Christine being on and off relationship with this other man Wayne the confident up himself type. Daniel is the kind of shy guy much like myself I can relate who could never quite tell Christine how he felt. One day he had decided to try take the plunge and tell Christine. Before he could Wayne interrupted intimidating Daniel til he went back in his shell and walked away. That was the last anyone had seen of Daniel for a few months 
until he returns as something else something terrifying



I find the story is very well structured and will leave anyone reading it wanting more. The story and art go hand in hand. I find as I read it more and got to know the Daniel character more the more I actually feel sorry for him because of the injustice he suffers throughout the story. It's very rare when any story can move me to tears. In my oppinion I hope somehow Daniel gets a happy ending. I feel this story has something for everyone. It's a little murder mystery, Romance, Slasher, psychological and supernatural thriller, and crime. 
It's definitely a great read if you are a horror fanatic the death scenes are drawn great and has enough gore for those of you who don't mind the blood.
Not only is it a great horror tale it's also a great revenge story. and the Character development is just amazing
all packed up nice and neat and sweet package. I highly recommend giving it a read I am currently awaiting for the next episodes so I can keep reading. I highly recommend you check it out and decide for yourself. You won't be dissappointed

Sarah Nelson has done such an amazing job with this comic I'm looking forward to seeing more of her work in the near future. 

I would like to thank you all for taking the time to read my first written review please help yourself to the free content on the side bar 

and I invite you to check out my own horror webcomic Dead Girls Doll and thank you again





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